Score: 7

"Not bad at all."

by: CommonOddity

date: July 5, 2008

Hmmmkay. Brutal stuff first.

1. Sounds cookie-cutter-ish. It's not bad, there is melody behind it... But it almost sounds like a remix of Balandria's - Heaven at some points.
2. Too much impact with some of the sounds and not enough clarity. For the intro you did distinctively separate one of the sounds when you did a sweep/pan or whatever the hell you call that.
3. This is not trance. Yeah, bit awkward to get into it... But this is closer to Dance by leaps and bounds, than trance. Trance is Astral Projection, Chicane, Dj-Immune, Infected mushroom (few songs really). It is a genre that is supposed to let you melt away into the music. The song you posted here is more about getting up, dancing, spilling your drink on some girl's blouse and sitting the hell down after an awkward look from 5 strangers.

Good job with coordination, placement and pacing. Your song is interactive and it interweaves sounds in a relative manner. They do need some Eq work and balancing, but otherwise, good job. Keep up the good work :)

Score: 9

"feedback 2"

by: Quistybetter

date: May 30, 2008

The intro is an earcatcher! keep it in:)
But i'm missing some kind of evolvement in the music, the ending has the same feeling/sound as the beginning...

-Q

Score: 7

"feedback"

by: anotter

date: May 29, 2008

Sounds well put together enough, and I know you're probably going for a club/rave feel, but I kinda got tired of the four major power chords repeating over again. I dunno really cause dance isn't my fav genre to begin with. You asked for feedback. Oh but keep the spastic intro, it was def and attention grabber for me.