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Journey Of Colossus

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Not finished...

I'm stuck XD.

Just uploadng to get some feedback, CC (constructive criticism), and some suggestions...

The finish will probably sound nothing like the demo...

Then again XD.

Well...

Rate, Comment, and Enjoy!

=xXSK8Xx=

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Great!

Needs a bit of work with the piano, but otherwise I love this.
Thanks,
TAK

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Alright alright!!

But may I ask, what is it with the piano I should fix?

Any suggestions?

Is something messed up...?

Thanks for the review!

lovely!

enjoy the piano and everything. I'd say change the clapping sound hehe i think it adds to much of a 80's sound to it! I'd go with something maybe a lil more lighter. Other then that this is really fun to listen to!

Wyldfyre1

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Cool cool.

I can understand the clapping though.
It does tend to become annoying...

Thanks for the review!

pepsichallenge

It's pretty cool so far. Some delay on the clap might make it blend better with the other instruments, just a suggestion! It may not work but give it a try and see what it sounds like. Also, you should add some random effects throughout to give the song more depth and create a bit of an atmosphere. Like some fading buzzes or white noise type stuff, not sure how to explain, but hopefully you kinda get what I mean?

Good job! Get to work and finish this up!

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Yeah I feel you!

I've never tried any random stuff so I'll see if I can pull it off!

Thanks for the feedback!

Nice

It fits in its genre perfectly.
The piano was nicely done, and the synths in the background fitted it well.
The only repetitive aspect was the drums, as they didnt change throughout the song, which made it feel like it couldve been building up too something but didnt in the end.
Otherwise, a nice song.
Keep up the good work :D
9/10
5/5

-xXSnowBladeXx

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Thanks for the review!

I'll make sure to change up the drums!

Really interesting!

I like the flavor of this piece, it starts of with a sort of hesitant feeling, and then opens up just at the right time.
I'd like to hear more of the main instruments though! It sounds a little muted, which would be fine without theclapping effect I guess that's what it is, I hear it everywhere and don't know what to call it.
Anyway, long story short, if the tunes were brightened a little, sharpened, I think it would sind really cool. Of course too much of ANYTHING will be going the wrong way anyway. 4/5

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Ha ha, yeah, the claps I'm going to change.

I have way too much of it...

Again, I have to spend more time on the aspect of music that I suck at which is making the beat.

If I finish it, which I should, I'll PM you and let you know!

Credits & Info


Listens
934
Downloads
82
Votes
5
Score
4.30 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 27, 2008
9:34 PM EDT
File Info
Song
3.2 MB
3 min 29 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.