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this song i wrote in well....about 10 min...its simple but i think the melody is gud though my voice aint the best unfortunately...i hope u enjoy it...it is quiet so turn up ur speakers

lyrics:
Here we sit
Just dreaming of a
Way that we
escape from this

Looking on
Into the future
Just dreaming of
A better place

This is life
Realize it
Dreams don't come
They fade away

This is life
It just gets harder
Pain comes
Love fades away

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Average Score: 7.4 / 10

Score: 10

"May I Suggest..."

by: DJ-Dax

date: August 9, 2008

You have a good Voice, Either Get Your Microphone Boosted Up to Hear You Better, or Get someone to Try guitar for you. I really think your voice can take you a little further

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Score: 7

"You need a new singer"

by: Ihmed

date: July 29, 2008

no offense..your voice is silent and you should only play the guitar...and the lyrics :D could change them a little bit..but everything else is fine :D keep going

July 30, 2008

Author's Response:

like i responded b4 this was a one take on track kind of thing...the other music i hav is solely guitar and no vocals but this was just sumthin i may re record l8r with a diff vocalist

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Score: 7

""nice try""

by: rayray88

date: July 13, 2008

this could be amazing like the others are saying, you should get someone else to sing,turn down the guitar and when u sing the tempo of the guiitar chords dont match aswell as i'd hope but try it again and i bet it would be twice as good as this!

July 30, 2008

Author's Response:

yeah...this was done in one take on one track...so i couldnt adjust the vocal audio w/o changing the guitar. and as many ppl hav alluded to i am not a singer so a0 im not used to playin while im singin which threw off my strumming and b) my voice sux lol. lately ive been doing just guitar tracks and havent gotten around to rerecordin it...but one of these days

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Score: 7

"You can make it better!"

by: sdgyjh

date: July 12, 2008

I so much agree with boycartoonist. Get another one to sing it and don't let the guitar be so loud next time. Don't know if you already have re-recorded it - if not, why not? This could be so great. I like the lyric.

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Score: 6

"would of been amazing!"

by: boycartoonist

date: May 26, 2008

I like it, I like it!
But you really need to get some one else to sing (friend maybe?)
turn up the voices too. guitar is loud in comparison..
I mean... this could be REAL awesome.
I would LOVE it if you would re-record it and resubmit!

May 26, 2008

Author's Response:

thanks...yeah this was just sort of a proof of concept...i may get my friend to sing it l8r and rerecord it...and sorry bout the guitar being loud i had to record the singing and guitar using the same mic on one track so the sound levels r a bit wack.

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