Score: 5
"I'll be honest this needs work..."
date: May 24, 2008
Like you asked, I'll just stick to constructive critizism.
1. Good chords=suspense
2. Too long of a break at end=bad
3. Length-even in the nature of a loop, loops need to be longer than 4 measures
Anywho, if you were to resubmit this edited, I wouldn't doubt it would turn out good, but at the moment, it's not really worth my time.
---The Fair Reviewer---
May 24, 2008
Author's Response:
I don't know why there is such a long pause at the end. It sounds a lot different without it.