Score: 7
"ehhh"
date: May 24, 2008
this is an overall okay track but it just doesn't seem to have any direction.
some tips:
the melody itself just kind of wanders and isn't very interesting since it just repeats the whole song and isn't very cool sounding in the first place.
the beats just repeat every measure--it gets really boring really quickly that way. make things change and vary! that makes it much better. the way you used the bass drum and the snare got kind of annoying after a really short time, just constantly playing on 16th notes... ahhhh
and the whole song just sounds really empty--theres like a max of 2 instruments playing at a time and it just sounds like nothing's going on lol. add in a bassline, some effects, itll make it much more interesting.
finally, your lead synths sounded really basic and cliched and dint really jive with each other very well, so i thought that could be improved too.
i cant say i was expecting a masterpiece out of two sleep-deprived hours of work, but this could have been a lot better in my opinion. plz take this as constructive crit and not insults lol
if you got time, check my stuff out too--its only fair ;)
May 24, 2008
Author's Response:
lol. Yea, I just started working with half of these instruments in the song, so I'll have to improve. Thx! I may check out your songs, as well.