Score: 9
"((VOTED5))"
date: May 23, 2008
You came on a little slow with the weird ambient beggining but the song got so much better as it went on. The synth was cool and had some distorsion that kind of gave it that signiture "goth" feal. The drum beat was good but I personally found the claps to be a little loud compared to the synth, since the synth should be the most focus you probably don't want that.
This was very good so I don't recomend changing to much, just work on everythings volume until you find what really hits the spot. You may want to shorten the ambient begginning to because 0 bombers might vote from the first 10 seconds because it's not goth music, that's just a minor suggestion though. Anyways it was a really great song that you should be proud of, good job.