Score: 7
"Here are some idea's"
date: June 12, 2008
Well, The Drum Beat Is Good
Perhaps Some more instruments... or synth, have like an overall under beat, but then some other melody going over top, the one you have now, just does not seem to fill out the whole song.
If It Were Me, I personaly dont think that it is complete, I would add some kind of melody after the 45 second mark, cause there, it just seems empty.
Perhaps some guitar solo would be good after the 45 second mark. It also seems to repetitive. Some octave change or a speed up would be sick. What I like to do is to calm the music down a little, like taking out the drum beat for a little while, sort of like taking vowels out of a sentence, then to bring it back with a big bang and a lot more complex drumming, or more synth.
but that is just what I would do, this is a great song, hoped I help! :P, if you dont get what I mean, msg me or something.
July 2, 2008
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks for the great comment. Currently, my MIDI keyboard is not with me, but I'll get it in a couple of weeks and start playing with it. Thanks again for the comments, they are very clear and helpful ! I'll definitely try to implement them =)