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yeah, this is badly mixed and im probably not gonna look back. but whatevs.

NOTE: THIS SONG IS NOT FINISHED.

NOTE2: LISTEN THE WHOLE WAY THROUGH. It gets much more dramatic and intense when the second chorus comes around, along with some fun effects.

it is a remix of Mariah Carey's Touch My Body. the only thing left intact from the song are the lyrics, and some is distorted a bit. When (a.k.a. if) I'm done, there will be much more editing going on.

I made this for one of my friends who is a Mariah Carey fan(atic) haha. hope u guys enjoy. though the lyrics definately do not reflect the tone of the song haha

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Average Score: 8.8 / 10

Score: 10

"Kicks some ass"

by: Muesical-Pope

date: August 12, 2008

I did it. But I agree.. maybe i just like loud vocals :P but I think vocals could be louder in some parts :/ Probably just me tho :) I dont really know what it "should" be

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Score: 10

"nice"

by: Aldohhin

date: June 18, 2008

Hmm nice vocals :D Keeps me in fire :P

June 20, 2008

Author's Response:

rock on!

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Score: 6

"Well,"

by: endlessnumber

date: June 11, 2008

I didn't forget about you

Technical:
The vocals are too loud. They have enough treble that they'd cut right through everything else, even down a few dB.
The riff you bring in at the bridge could have been bumped down a couple octaves - it was just annoying where it was.

I think the beat fit the mood of the vocals well, and I thought you did a good job of sampling, considering taking vocals from pop songs is incredibly difficult sometimes. The thing I'm disappointed about with this is that you didn't really do anything special with it besides a cute little snare roll.

:/
3/5

June 20, 2008

Author's Response:

heh ill take ur advice, adn yeah i wasnt very creative with this since i planned on doing more but jst got kinda bored of it lol. thx for looking :)

though i did do a little bit of synth work there, but yeah, nothing very interesting. whatevs next time [or if i work on this more ;)]

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Score: 9

"Well done"

by: Evilcactus

date: May 23, 2008

Cool, It's the kinda quality you get on the radio, hehe.

June 20, 2008

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wooo!

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Score: 9

"wow sounds great"

by: Semaphore

date: May 21, 2008

you've synth marias vocal great ^^
and choosed a good sound
but at 0:55 to much it's a little bit distorting
try to fix that and it's a professional mix =)

May 22, 2008

Author's Response:

thanx for taking a look! im really glad you liked it. ive heard a similar criticism about that section, though i never really agreed, but ill see how more ppl respond and then may change it.