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Date
05/21/2008
File Info
Song
3.7 MB
4 min 6 sec
Score
3.82 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.82 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
24,126 Plays | 3,008 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Pop
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Author Comments

Hello again newgrounds. I know I said I wouldn't be doing any lyricals pieces for a while, but I couldn't help this one. A lot of work went into this one, and I have little to say other than enjoy. I'd also like to make everyone aware of two things...

1. I'll be coming to Toronto May 31 - June 3 to meet with several artists from Newgrounds in a collaboration for my 50th submission. I will also be going to Kamloops and Calgary hopefully soon as well for the same reason. Be sure to PM me if you'd like to be a part of the tour.

2. A little heads up... one or two of you have found this all on your own, but a lot of my music is available on the facebook application "ILike". Just add the app to your page and search for the Artist "Daniel Stang", and you can find all my latest works to add to your page.

That should be everything... Now... here be the lyrics

-=Verse 1=-
Hide inside my head
Where i can't follow
Your just another Dream
That I'll never see

Gaze a crystal ball
To find it hollow
Can he know for sure
Just who you'll be

-=Chorus=-
Girl in my dreams tonight
Won't you please come to life
I don't know who you are

Girl who choosen me
Torture and agony
All I can remember

Is when I wake
Your touch still lingers
On me

-=Verse 2=-
I can see you smiling
Through the curtains
Betray your secret
Guarded with zelotry

The power of your Capture
Isn't certain
The beauty of your grace
Is mystery

-=Bridge=-
Maybe you are
My own torment
Changing right
Behind my eyes

(Back to Chorus)

Reviews


ArckJrArckJr

Rated 5 / 5 stars

-.-'

Im stupid, but i cant just smile when i hear ur music.
Its really good^^


MilkMan-Dan responds:

wait... you can't smile... or you can't stop smiling?... lol because it would be a bad song if it made you frown all the time. Thanks.

MMD


AncientGameboyAncientGameboy

Rated 5 / 5 stars

...

This song is so amazing. I remember the first time I heard this, I played it so many times. This is so awsome.


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XxX-lamara-XxXXxX-lamara-XxX

Rated 5 / 5 stars

this song touched my heart

I wish i was a kid again
All she can do is reach for that broken piece of glass
all she had to say was just kiss my ass!
i can't stand seeing her hurt
because it hurts me too
i can't believe it was all because of you
8th grade brought on all sorts of pain
love, loss, cuts, and tears
whatever happened to the childhood years?
all there is to teenage years
is drama and lies
and pools of tears
i wish i could go back to elementry
where you could be a nerd, no one would care!
and always always you had to share
i wish i was a kid again
because it was so much fun
i wish i could take to my head, a gun
it would all kill us quicker
but we like to feel the pain
and love to feel the rain
our tears come for more than just scrapes
cuts, burns, boy friends, and rapes
we cry now and dont tell our mamma
things would be better without all this drama
i wish i was a kid again
because then i could just cry
all i would have to say is i fell
and people would wonder why
now that i stand here today
i cant say that i fell
people are the reason why i cry
and then they wonder why i didnt say why
i wish i was a kid again
without all this tears, loss, love, and pain
i wish i was a kid again
back then there was only one reason i loved to play in the rain


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MilkMan-Dan responds:

Love the poem. I think you'd like my song "Sand Castles", same theme. Maybe not so eloquently put though. Thanks for the uhm, poem/review.

MMD


djwizzkiddjwizzkid

Rated 5 / 5 stars

DUDE... thawt u were leaving NG.

don't leave NG. ur music is far to good for you to leave....


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MilkMan-Dan responds:

Haha, not leaving mate. Here to stay for a while.

MMD


juncksjuncks

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

IM ALMOST CRYING not realy

ITS SO BUTIFUL..OH MIY GAHD....ITS SO PEACFULL...BUT THE BEGINING SOUNDED IKE I SHOULD BE KILLING MYSELF NEXT TO SOME JULIET TIPE CHARACHTER......