agree with below 100%

because there isnt a definite form to the song (intro, main theme, breakdown, theme again etc) the whole thing will end up sounding like a big long intro and won't get anwhere. not using presets and all them fl drum samples like everyone else will give your music a unique sound which is better. One thing to add: in the bit where the snare comes in the beats seem random and should probably hold a stronger rhythm. i no i do that sometimes with drums. so its not bad but can be made much better.
-Deathkavaderva

Nice attempt.

Sounding pretty decent.
You could make it sound even better by:
-Using a better bassline
-Make the transitions smoother
-Make the song structure better: make an intro, a maintheme, an breakdown, a buildup, a blabla.
-Use way more fx'es
-Use better drumsamples
-Dont just use the Nexus presets. Modify them & be original.

Kr1z.

great

it was not bad. same as mine maybe. hey if you make flash you can use my music if you want. just pm me if you want. great job. keep the good work up.