LoL. that was wack (2)

really this could use a lot more work!

if this is your First draft of this song i would say polish the notes, a little the "Arp" was holding it all, some times less elements are better, you dont want to use to many over powering sounds my friend, if you need tips on Mixing in FL i could help you out, look up Druids-warcry on NG

other then that work on it some more and it will sound right!

-Druid-

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Nice but . . .

I don't know if you noticed or not but the synths throughout the entire song are very uneven and are not in sync with the rest of the instruments. This is not necessarily a bad thing(personally I like it), it's used frequently in classical music. And it needs more bass, the bass was strong enough but it was too infrequent to get my feet moving. If you put in a stable quick bass beat and made ALL of the instruments a little more intense it would be danceable.

As you said this was a first draft and so I believe that you will be able to improve on this exponentially. It's a good start and I look forward to hearing the finished project. PM me when it's done!

A 6 out of ten for the current song and a 10 out of ten for the potential. Hence the 8.

Needs a lil work

this has got what it takes too be top grade stuff
just need too maybe sort out timings on some of the stuff =)
but its got all the right ingrediants too be some serious heat =P
keep it up dude can't wait for the finished version