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This is my second submission to newgrounds (just keeping track :D)

I don't really get the title either...

Yes, it is short. This is only the second complete song I've ever done (the first one was submitted earlier) and I have another one which is a minute and a half, but I can't get it to mp3 format.

Please, please review! I can't tell you how much it would mean to me to get feedback!

(ps: what category should this go in other than miscellaneous???)

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Average Score: 10.0 / 10

Score: 10

"Agreed"

by: Vaporize

date: May 14, 2008

FL Studios 8 xxl producer edition is some bomb ass software. look into it.

this is a pretty damn good track without any editing er anything tho, especialy for

your second submission.

May 15, 2008

Author's Response:

Another ten!

I'll definitely look into FL studio 8. I've heard it mentioned a couple times on this site... but I thought it was "flash" studio 8, for animations... I'll google it :D

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Score: 10

"Well Hello There..."

by: ParishIsDead

date: May 14, 2008

This is great for your second submission! Try to get a software that doesn't make everything sound so...well...not real. I mean the reality is that you did your best with what you have and if you can create something like this then I am proud of you and proud to be your audience and friend.

P.S. maybe try a rhythm based category

May 15, 2008

Author's Response:

Hey :D

Yeah, I really, really need some better sounds. Really, really.

I'm using software called Cakewalk Music Creator at the moment, but when I made this, I was using a trial version of a generic "midi maker."

Ugh! (not to your ten, thanks for that :D)

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Score: 10

"I like it!"

by: Anti-Paragon

date: May 14, 2008

It has a nice peppy flow, and sometimes short doesn't mean bad. This song is quite good. My only criticism is that the symbol-like sounds at 0:45 and 0:52 seem out of place. The first one is just right though. Try putting other things in there!
Otherwise, no complaints! I'm not going to ding you for some symbols (no pun intended).
Sorry if I'm not naming the right instrument. You know what I mean.

May 15, 2008

Author's Response:

Yes, it was a cymbal. The reason they're off is because the mp3 version of the sound is slower than the suckish midi version. But thanks for the ten!!!

And I love puns :D

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