Score: 8
"((VOTED4))"
date: May 13, 2008
The guitar playing was really great and so was the bass but something just seamed not right here. It sounded like two different songs put together if you ask me. First part being guitar and second being bass. The guitar really made a great intro so defiantly save it for a future, full length song
If the bass was supposed to be an outro, then you probably started to early for a song as short as this. Also you won't want to end the guitar as ubruptly as you did and just go right into the bass play. The transition sounded pretty sloppy if you ask me. Also you'll want to do something about that blank space at the end.
All in all, there was definantly a lot of skill in this song. It was just presented in not the best way you could. Just try to add more to the middle and try to spice up the outro a bit because it didn't sound to good the way it was now.
May 13, 2008
Author's Response:
Ya i thought about that.
It did seem to just switch abruptly and the ending was lame.
Im just getting started in music and stuff and this wasn't that good i admit.
But i thank you for your input my good sir.