Score: 9

"great"

by: aesopiankitty

date: May 28, 2008

its not ur best
still
very mellow
which i dig
but its still missing a bit of expression
needs jazz XD

Score: 9

"You need a counter-melody"

by: Suezo

date: May 23, 2008

This is a great trance song.

What I think you are missing from this piece is a "partner" melody to run along-side your existing one. It sounds awful lonely all by its lonesome, and in a way, erratic.

The second voice would work like.... An owner holding a dog on a leash, the dog (1st melody) leads to way but the owner (2nd melody) keeps it in line and gives it proper direction.

I would make it the same sound wave, but maybe alter it slightly.

Kepp up the good work,

"Zo."

Score: 8

"nice"

by: smillinvic

date: May 11, 2008

i like it aswome

Score: 10

"Pretty good.... actually"

by: hereforrock

date: May 11, 2008

I like it! It's really mystic like. It has a very cool sound. I can't really say much about this. It's really good man. You did an awesome job. Keep it up. :)