Score: 9
"Wow!"
date: May 9, 2008
Y'know, I didn't even realise there were only 2 instruments, because the harmony was right on.
The only things I can think of is to:
A) Give it a more "complete" end, bring the two instruments together for a final harmony, and trail off. You were close in the piece.
B) More instruments (which you're doing). I suggest a flute perhaps, or another main instrument.
C) Vary the dynamics and silences more.
If you continue then so shall I.
-Kjhf
May 9, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks! After listening to it a few times I realized that the end really does need to be changed, and a flute might work, it would have to have a fair amount of... altering. I don't really have any good flute patches to play around with :/ I might add a bass drum as well, not like a rhythm, but just a big THUD! at key points, maybe near the beginning, what I'm finding hard is to add more without mucking up the harmony. I really appreciate your feedback, thanks!