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Uploaded
May 5, 2008 | 4:18 PM EDT
File Info
Song
6.3 MB
6 min 45 sec
Score
3.53 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.53 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
634 Plays | 74 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Indie
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Author Comments

I made this song recently. I hope you enjoy it. Any criticism would be greatly appreciated.

On the mountain in the clouds,
the only one allowed to feel at all
has to fall.
On the mountain she stands proud
and all around is nothing
at all.
On the mountain in the sky
in her eyes she sees
it all.

And the peaks are painted white
and the stars sneak out tonight
and the river whispers secrets
to the trees.
And the owls watch her run
from the sky into the sun
where she falls into
the breeze.
She never said that it was enough
and we all had to call her bluff
and the mountain stood so tall.
I never made it up to the top.
My spirit broke and my body dropped.
I never felt anything
at all.

And in the shadows the city stands today
patiently waiting for the mountain to go away
We've often wondered just how long it would take
to bring it down, to seal its fate.
And if the mountain wasn't there at all
I would've never had to watch her fall
We both could've been nice and safe
We could've been in a better place.
And somebody should just tell me why
The mountain stood there and watched her die
while I couldn't do a thing at all
I just lied there and watched her fall.

On the mountain
on the mountain

Reviews


MasterDan1742MasterDan1742

Rated 3 / 5 stars

hmm

not to bad i agree with Yagru



yagruyagru

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

potential

but that's all this song is.

fix timing.

work some sound issues.

MASTER IT.

you got yourself a song


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ericdrebin responds:

Thanks for the advice, i'll take it into consideration.