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Credits & Info

Date
05/05/2008
File Info
Song
5.8 MB
2 min 33 sec
Score
4.10 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.10 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
5,330 Plays | 209 Downloads
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Genres:
Other - Miscellaneous
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Author Comments

This is a little different than most of music I make, it has words and nearly complete sentences. I originally intended having a female sing this but, as I was plotting the music I went ahead and did the vocals myself. This is the only version I have because unfortunately, I saved over the project in ACID with another tune by accident. I forgot how to replicate the melody so, I just gave up on having a girl do it.

The air is rich tonight.
Your scent makes me so high.
Come to me this time.
I promise, I won't bite.

Feel me
Kiss me
Feel me drain you

Your skin is warm to touch.
I know I have you crushed.
You say that you're so strong.
My lips say your dead wrong.

Feel me
Kiss me
Feel me drain you

You were so good.
For a moment it was love,
did you feel it?
I swallowed it all.
My mouth stained with your sweetness.
I'm not sorry your gone.
I'm not sorry I need this.
I'm not sorry at all.

I know I said I wouldn't but you look so sweet

Feel me
Kiss me
Feel me drain you

(I know the volume is lower than most tunes. I record everything near max volume so, I can listen to things loudly without hurting speakers. Ya huurrrd?!) :D

Reviews


knightkillerknightkiller

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

hell ya

it is ok


pookicker responds:

Rock'n'rolllll


DieSteinDieStein

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow, cool

NIce touch on the voice, i like the effect.
I found the disorted synths to fit the whole dark theme, with all the metal drums and all.
Sounds Darkwave'ish, reminded me of "Collide" on the instrumental.
Getting a female singer for this would make it even more closer to that.
Lol at people finding this weird and rating it low for that. It's different from what you listen to, so don't rate music from genres you don't like.
Saved, gonna upload it on my phone. Thanks for making such a cool track.


People find this review helpful!
pookicker responds:

Thanks, especially for the line about rating a song in a genre you don't like. I keep my ears open for anything on this site because that's what I think it's about, different, original, creations. I stopped rating the 376,000,000 trance and dance tracks that suffocate the front page...


ComplaintComplaint

Rated 5 / 5 stars

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amagawd thats on my Ipod THANKS

xoxoxoooo
:D


pookicker responds:

Hahaa! Thank YOU for downloading it!


Andrea364Andrea364

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Okay...

It's a bit awkward thanks to all the flanging on the vocals. It's just a weird song to me... I don't really like it. Better synths would be a nice improvement. ACID Pro isn't exactly the best thing when you want to make a song like this. Sure, it has nice Acid synths, but not much else. Try buying a keyboard or something cause this just isn't your thing in my opinion.


pookicker responds:

Your honesty kills me and I will not deny your opinion. Coming back from your profile, you're half my age and have more talent in the music field than I have and that says a lot so, I respect your word. However, making "music" is only my video game and playing an instrument is something I don't know how to do. If it weren't for my car, I'd probably throw more money into more professional, musical apparatuses and maybe learn to sing. Thanks for listening!


NGprtlNGprtl

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

woah...

whats with the backstreet theme man? nice drums and taht though...


pookicker responds:

Every body yeeaaah Rock your Body yeaah Backstreet's back, alright!

Holy shit. I'm really sorry.