Woot!

Awesome for your first time, you're a real talent and i think we'll see alot more of you in the future, btw, don't use the demo version of Toxic, it's highly annoying im afraid :P

Shame though, since toxic has such perfect sounds.

This was bad,

Your should learn how to raise up the levels so it has better clarity. Also, the track was a little repetitive, you should try to shorten it a little.