Aliright
I agree with the reviewer below, it sounds like an introdcution to a dance song... If you're using FL Studio you HAVE TO buy some vst's (programs with really good synths) Look up a program called Nexus (made by REFX) its great :)
Nice start to the song though keep it up.
Have a listen to a few of my songs (Final Goodbye & Civilised Society) I have created them two in FL Studio... But used Nexus and a few other vst's for the sounds, you can tell the difference
Keep up the work though :)
EQ