needs one more part

u just need one more part
then its a full piece
2 parts would be ideal
a classical piano playing this type would mesh well
and then also something with more of a strings sound

Pretty Nice!

u make good songs for the FL defaults and stuff. im liking. but they get repetative but u still put new melodies in. great job!

Tasteful

You have a good grip on pretty much everything in most areas (all you gotta do is practice and play around for interesting sounds)

I think the area you are having trouble with is with percussion and tempo. Actually, this song is much better in that area than your other songs, but what it comes down to is less is more. This is expecially true in electronica. When you add extraneous stuff, it is INCREDIBLY distracting to the ear. Try going as simple as you can, and then building it up ONLY in areas that improve your song. (Remember, it may sound cool, but that doesn't mean it fits with the rest of the song/tempo choice.)

So yea, you get
5/5 and 8/10 for the review

Aswome

nice it kinnda reminds me of runaway ..... nice job

Great

This is great for your first submission. It sounds really great and it is just a great trance song. I like the beat.