Needs some slight work

So this one needs some slight work, the "QUALITY" was in need of more quality and it was too short so you could make it longer somehow, Those are some things that could improve on this but other then all that said you have done very swell here on this track.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
need of more quality and it was too short so you could make it longer somehow, Those are some things that could improve on this

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uhh ok the rage is defiantly bottled...