Aww :O
The intro started out realy great !!!
WHY DID YOU CHANGED THE PITCH !!!!!
it sounded realy REALY cool on the pitch you had him on the first time i heard it.
you could make another melody and used this cool one as your bassline.
you also got some realy cool synths there, and also the drums are great again.
you realy mastered how to make and use percussion. good job ^^
now the only thing you have to master yet ( my opinion ) is how to create and apply a good melody. cause that is the weak point in most of your songs.
this time te song time was a bit long to xD
when you make it short, people want them to listen again.
now they heared your song for to long, what makes it boring.
anyway, its a very good song AGAIN ^^.
9/10 5/5
3.57 / 5.00 (+ 0.33)
grtz DJ Trezy