NOTE: This piece is repetitive due to the fact that it is a club mix.
NOTE: I am not good at mastering, so if this doesn't suit your likings, then I'm sorry.
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Dedicated to my father, who committed suicide before I was 2.
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It's finished!
This is my longest track to date. I used a MIDI file for the melody starting around 2:30, I think. The rest are just edited versions of that. I took out the scratching, 'cause one person didn't seem to think that it fit. I agreed with them, to an extent.
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Made in FL Studio 7 XXL Producer's Edition
Used:
VSTs:
~Absynth 4
~3xOsc
Free samples, soundfonts, & a MIDI file from:
http://www.vipzone-sample s.com
uhh
NG is messed up or something, because its not showing the song on the Trance list, or its just me. I actually perfer the list not to work so the score cant go down, but still being on the list means more recognition and stuff like that. Well, great song, I dont know what else to say, sorry lol.
And....... sorry about your father, that kinda sucks... having your father kill himself.
Thanks, but then again, you can't go back in time & fix mistakes that great... Oh well, life moves on.
~Zariah X-POSED~
awesome
sounds great and could easily be used as a theme for a game. Also the trance feel is great, feels like a desperation attack or last chance all out attack.
Lol, dude, this piece isn't even CLOSE to that hardcore. This is more of a calming, kind of, "I'm sorry for everything I've done wrong to you" piece.
~Zariah X-POSED~
sounds good
its sounds good man but It feels like u use Z3ta in this tune.. I love the fade in with your lead line.. very nice and subtle.. also appreciate the how u add in your instruments but you dont go over kill with them.. Like i say the best songs are ones used with less instruments.. one thing I dont like however is your snare buildup.. u buildup and instantly cutoff.. BUT since u came right back in with the loudness it fit the song..great job with laying down the tracks and using the volume to not overpower one another.. the bass is there and u can feel it but thats not all u feel.. the only I could suggest to make it better is to use some panning on it.. like a 360degree Stereo Field Rotate or something.. or if u have heard of X-Y Elephanting,, its pretty much the same deal.. great song.. great effort.. u were goin for the club feel and I feel like its a little slack for club.. ONLY because club tunes are all about there KICK drums and yours happenes to be more subtle and you have an actual melody and addins which builds an actual song.. but hey its good either way man.. keep it up 5/9
I didn't use z3ta+, I used a combination of 3xOsc & Absynth 4 for the lead. The pad was a free soundfont from VIP Zone. I turned the release up on it so it sounds better.
Panning could've helped, yeah, but I got lazy, lol.
Thanks for the critisism. :D
~Zariah X-POSED~
Simply perfect.........
i cant describe it....its too magnifecent.......i dont know wat 2 say but EXCELLENT JOB AND KEEP GOIN TILL YOU CANTS GO ANY FURTHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent Job.
This is a great song. Words are failing me to describe the awesomeness that this song brings to the table.
Your melody gives me an idea why you dedicated this to your father, and it is fitting. The bassline is simple and very clean, and is hidden just enough in the background to let the listener know it's there, while simultaneously keeping the attention on the melody. Drums are well done. Overall, a great job. Thanks for taking the time to upload this to NG. A worthy addition to the audio portal.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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