Score: 3
"Ok... ugh..."
date: July 19, 2008
I assume that the second round being distorted in the melody is purposeful, but your harmony doesn't match the melody, it's out-of tune.
However, the only good aspect of this song is that, unlike any other loop I've heard, this one actually flows from the ending back to the beginning, and there isn't a space at the end to throw it off.
Needs more work than needed to get the current quality, but it loops well.
Therefore, you don't need to die in a fire.
3/10, 1/5.
August 2, 2008
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