Score: 8
"ooooh intense."
date: April 20, 2008
yum, the melodies all complemented each other and the transitions were smooth, mixing good, all the works. good job! but here are some suggestions/complaints:
i think that for that "clubbed to death" feel and to strengthen all those woodwind instruments going around, some warm fuzzy strings would have been really nice.
maybe some subtle crash cymbal usage would have made the beat fit in better too.
sometimes the lead wind instrument sounded a little bit too synthetic, but i guess its hard to get around that electronically. also, the melody at the start seemed to be wandering a bit too much, but once more instruments picked up it got on track.
finally, for hte drum portions, maybe make them build up a little more intensity and have a little more of a change of atmosphere to get a grittier sound. IMO that would be clutch, since the only main change was the beat itself and the piano introduced. let variation occur there too! :)
yeah, thats all i really got to suggest. gj and gl! [if u got time, looka me :D]