Score: 8
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date: April 16, 2008
Hey, quite a good song.
Alot of things in there need to be EQ'd better and levelled better, somethings just stick out much more than others when they should be the lead. The high end of the bass that opposes the heavy kicks interferes with the vocals and so are some of the lead synths. Also, the hit the comes after the kick doesn't sound too good either, sounds out of place.
There are a nice set of FX in here, great lead ups and dynamics with some of the synths.
Sometimes there are too many things going on, like at some points there seems to be two basslines and some of the sound effects and subleads interfere with the main ones.
Lastly, the kick sounded like there were two layered but one is off-time just a small bit and it makes it sound the like there's two hits of the kick, off-time but real close together, eh it might just be me.
I'm not too sure about the legalities of the vocals aswell, unless of course you've bought them in a pack or they're free. Where'd you get them from? they sound real good.
Anyways, overall it's a good sounding song, better than most of the shite on this site, and well done for getting a song like this over 4mins. There's just some small things I'm concened about.
-OT
April 17, 2008
Author's Response:
yeah i know about the kicks but this is only almost a probe so it isn't the final product. The vocals....actualle friend gave 'em to me so I dunno from where they are and neither do he remembers from where he get 'em ><
anyway thx for your comment and yeah...there aren't so many great songs like this one round here :P