epic

found it on just4pales flash, awesome shit. your score is now 4.31

Good try

It's a good try, but i agree with absynth the beginning is weak and a little annoying, this song is definitely not done though judging from your lack of engrish knowledge im assuming it'd be hawt in teh japans.

awesome

amazing screw teh other guys

Cool song

Its cool, i first heard it in just2pales movie. I like it, even if it took you 2 hours, good things come in small packages. O and i got ur score from 3.80 to 4.14 =D

interesting....

I havent heard something like this before. i heard the beginning of it on toymaker, by just2pale. i wanted ot hear it for myself, so i did. it aint bad. but it does need work. but im being a hypocryte. do what the first guy said. he had construstive critisism. which is usually good.