Hmm

Its strange to me but I like it, I have criticisms but im lazy

Artistic

Nice, I like music like this, it allows you for deep thinking. very artistic riff you've done, the only fault is it sounds very FruityLoops which is hard to get rid of unless you invest alot into Synth packages.... I use FL Stuidio 7 but dont use there synths or effects, I just use it for the piano roll and all my software iv built up over the years takes care of the rest, I can recomend some really good software you would really like