sweet!!

i love the bassline, and the drum beat is, dare i say, BALLIN 2 DA MAX!!

drum n bass, not my type of music genre though

this is very good nonetheless

kudos

5/5 10/10

Hey.

Hi Noizaholic,

I think you posted your song during blaming time. I know the other songs that were submitted at the same time as mine were all blamed too. Oh well. We just gotta earn our spot back to a decent rating.

The drums are DnB. Has a unique pattern. Did you make it or is that a DnB drum loop? This is what I thought:

Good:
1) The beginning sounds church like if that makes sense to you. I like the bells. Something strange but different. Different is good.
2) 28 seconds in I like that digital like sound. Good stereo delay. Your best part. Again the bass kinda ruins it when it comes back.
3) As a song, it almost loops perfectly. I think this should be a loop. So umm, good loop.

Hmm:
1) I think the bass was a bit too distorted. It didn't sound clean. Plus it cut off really quick. Maybe put a longer delay time and/or sustain on it. Make less distorted, and maybe put a oscillator on it or some delay.
2) Not much is going on for what you call a "song" so that needs fixing.

In conclusion, a short song so I don't have much to say. Just fixing the bass can make this sound much better. As for making melodies, take lots of time to make a song. I tend to take no less than a month making a song. Heck, a month is pretty short too. Make a bunch of mini songs and take the best instruments and compositions of each and mesh them into one song. As for trying something trippy, use tape delay (or the delay where you choose the delay on each speaker) and make one of the speaker's have a slight (not too much) delay on it. Get's the whole jumpy feeling. Your better than me in DnB. I don't make this genre of music. Keep it up...and yes your song really got hit hard with zeros. Your score was 1.37/5. I will 5 it and give you a 9/10 review.

Bye for now

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