I can hear your heartbeat singing to me
hands shakeing just like sweet hickory leaves
I can hear your heartbeat singing to me
how I long to hold it, to set it free.
something I want to hear on a broken radio in a scary movie.
or perhaps coming out of the mist off the bow of a ship lost in placid waters.
Very nice
Nice creepy song, i am pretty sure i use this song in my next flash that I
will start making in somewhere in the end of october...
I have to mention that if someone who doesen't like to me is laughing and
happy all the time gets scared by something then this song, even the lyrics,
are sooo nice to hear :D
good
kinda scary, as usual. I see mist and malevolent sylphs coming after my soul.
However, you can only get so far with these little bits and pieces. Your voice is so good you could get high scores with a nursery rhyme, but you could do better.
nice
creeped me out
...uh...
sorta sounds creepy,but anyway it sounds pretty kool hehe ^^...
Ehh
I like the lyrics...although I'm not as fond as the delivery of them.
I feel the actual words and wording of the lyrics are pretty good and evoke feelings in me BUT without music in the back it falls flat for me a great deal.
To improve I would add some music (even simple music , tune , beat, sounds etc) to greatly enhance the song. Maybe even add some pauses as to not have it end so quick.
It has potential brotha.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
heather-lanham 
