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--Edit-- Now it cut's off where it should, enjoy! Oh yeah, and any actual title suggestions are welcome! :]

--Edit-- Ok, half the song is blank because FL didn't cut where it was supposed to, I'll fix it later b/c i don't have time now, just keep what does play in mind when rating and reviewing, Thnk!!

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This is not a finished product, i think it's going rather smoothly so far, but I'd someone else's opinion. So don't be shy, tell me what you think.

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Average Score: 8.7 / 10

Score: 10

"Nice start."

by: Viperodriguez

date: April 4, 2008

It's a nice start. I agree with N4B5T3R, it's a little top heavy. I feel it could flow better if you check the chords where the strings kick in. I definitely want to hear what happens where it faded out. Can't wait for the finished version and thanks for sharing.

April 4, 2008

Author's Response:

Yeah you can hear that lead come in right before it fades out comletely, it's just part of my technique :] Thnx for the review!

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Score: 10

"In the beginning..."

by: N4B5T3R

date: April 4, 2008

In the beginning the sound for the bassy deep tune is hardly hearable, try to make that louder, and please put more ravey sound into it (i.e listen to the song on the top of my favourites list, crying soul scratch remix, the main part of the song are rave hits...)I dont know what all the terms mean like synths and stuff, so If i dont make any sense, then just ignore the review!

thanks

April 4, 2008

Author's Response:

I'm geussing you mean the bass line is hard to hear, I'll try to tweak that as best i can. And i think you mean put more harder hitting, sawish kinda synths in, which I actually thought about doing. Thnx for the review!

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Score: 6

"Yeah!"

by: Zn3tz

date: April 4, 2008

I want the polished,finished version :) It was nice

April 4, 2008

Author's Response:

I'll be sure to let you know!

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