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I've been looking for so long... where is she? I have over a dozen of x-girlfriends people started thinking I'm a player... but it's not true, why do they lie? Where is She? My perfect lady? She doesn't have to be too beautiful, neither smart... I just want her to have a good heart and soul... I want her to respect me... someone who is trust worthy and will never lies... my search isn't done yet...

-edit- Just a quick piece that I have made. BTW people, I never had music lessons and just started playing the keyboard by myself not long ago, I would like some feedback as well as some criticism in your constructed reviews, enjoy :D

-BWA

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Average Score: 8.7 / 10

Score: 10

"well, read ya response to lejins review so..."

by: KillBillvolume2

date: April 4, 2008

when ya said haters, i guessed ya were referring to me, so fuck it, ill review this, great, no real problems at all, good smooth music, being honest. but if ya got something to say to me, dont imply it, just say it. i aint here to beef or any kinda shit, just here to make music ya digggg. anywayz, good track, and i hope ya find that girl who dont think u a playa haha

April 4, 2008

Author's Response:

no no, gurls like me! problem is dey always keep liyin to me about one thing or another, so I dump em... n ppl think i'm a playa bacause of dat.. naywayz, last time i review lejin was ages ago, and when I say haters I mean haters... like u knowm der r too many to name on this site, and bout da collabo-yeah why not, what equipment/softwaer do u have/own?

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Score: 8

"Good but seems really rushed"

by: Daftvillain

date: April 4, 2008

I'm looking forward to that 8 minute peice, because i enjoyed the first minute of the song, but something about the last 40 seconds just seems weird to me and it doesn't seem to end things.
Other than that last part though, i would say really good job for never having music lessons. 4/5

April 4, 2008

Author's Response:

I had better compositions.... -_- ....although it is true, I have rushed instead of perfectng my idea, but its just that I had 2 ideas which were good, but didn't fit each other quiet right... nevertheless, 8min pieace coming sooner or later ;D

-BWA

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Score: 8

"very pleasant"

by: Neon-Crepth

date: April 3, 2008

it sets a nice mood i think it was the one you were going for. it seems sad yet hopeful. the bass clef is workin' its stuff pretty well, i liek the way it meshes a little with the treble. when the music stopped and went into another section i think that could have been segwayed better; have more of a connection between the two parts. nice strings. overall the quality of the instruments are good but they could be EQed a little more precisely. nice composition over all, the song does its job...
5/5

-crepth

April 3, 2008

Author's Response:

Thank you, yeah, I kind of rushed with this one... less than 20minutes were spent on this and I only concentrated on the treble/bass/tone/volume level and the stereo image level.... totally forgot about EQ'ing, but did add some reverb to the piano to make it sound realistic and slightly distant, one day I will put out an 8minute piece that would contain 'all the pieces of the puzzle' and when it'll be complete I think it would be even better, thank you for the criticism and the positive feedback as well, I hope you have enjoyed this composition, once again, thank you :D

-BWA

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