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Falling Apart (vocals)

Author

John Guy (RealFaction)

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Date Submitted

04/03/2008 | 05:25PM EDT

File Information

Heavy Metal Song | 3 MB | 3 min 15 sec

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Current Score

4.27 / 5.00

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10 downloads

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Author Comments

I bet you ANYTHING the zero bombers will rate this zero just watch by the time it's 2-4 votes the score will be dropped to 2-3 probably. Alot of those fuckers ganged up on one of my last songs so someone is definately planning this with their friends. Well guess what they're doing? They are ruining the chance for people to see the song thats sold short because of them. There's no way I can find out who's doing it but it's the same people guarentee, just watch the zero bombers will come any minute now...

Intro

Paint a pretty picture across your face,
You'll end up to be a disgrace.
Why?

Verse 1

You have left the arms of safety,
You've been a target right out in the open,
You cant run away forever,
You pushed away the only reason why your heart wasn't broken.
Inside the shell you isolate yourself,
hurt by the words said by everyone else.
I can sense the shivers going down your spine,
there's no one you can trust, you've drawn the line.

Pre-Chorus

But is that really an excuse,
to be living in this painful abuse?
Believe me it's hard but you can make it,
Fortify your structure, and you can take it.

Chorus

The artist has painted, but the painting is tainted,
the picture has turned wicked now the image is faded.
Knocked down to knees, nothing but apathy,
desire for love, expecting sympathy.
Seal the scars and lock them away,
it's time to make a change today.

Verse 2

Where have you been for the past years?
You've gone somewhere else away from here.
It's time to wake up and see the truth of the lies,
Cry out the poison, and wash out your eyes.
How many more lies must you live, living alone?
It's impossible for you to do this on your own.
They don't love you, they could care less,
They give you the doses and say they're painless.

Outro

The painting is broken, it's falling apart.
Nothing but a blur, shot right in the heart.

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Average Score: 7.0 / 10

Score: 8
PinkPantiesPrincess

"Arr..."

date: April 3, 2008

I really like the lyrics to the song
The singing is a little sloppy...
Did you write/sing everything?
The sound is great
{love}

April 3, 2008

Author's Response:

yes I do I mean every once in a while my friend/partner Dustin helps me write songs. I know the singing is a little sloppy but I worked on it. I might redo it like I did another song, and thanks.

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Score: 6
bevermaly

"Hmm.."

date: April 3, 2008

I liked the song, but i think i would have preferred it without the lyrics. They sort of take away from the song, and it's not all that great singing. =\

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