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Apr 1, 2008 | 12:02 AM EDT
File Info
Song
1.8 MB
1 min 33 sec
Score
4.03 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.03 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,918 Plays | 210 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Trance
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Author Comments

EDIT: While your comments and reviews are still appreciated I actually have lost the FL file to this.

I'm trying to improve my sound and I'll delete this one after a while as I progress to finish it. I was hoping that people would be nice enough to review and help me through the process.

Things I would like to know - (I use FLStudios)
Does it sound good so far?
Should there be more build up?
Should I use different instruments and synths?
Do I need more FX or random sounds?
Is my intro too long?
Are my transitions smooth?
Any other suggestions.

I'm always trying to improve my sound and am willing to hear what people have to say. Thank you for suggestions and reviews they are greatly appreciated.

Reviews


Foxtrot-ZeroFoxtrot-Zero

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great Start

Either the intro is too long, or it needs more build up. If your intro is almost the entire song, then its too long. But it still needs a little more poured in.

Good Luck


Mrmilkcarton responds:

Not finishing this one, search the Author Bjra for a new look on the melody. This song is scrapped.


PikyofblakePikyofblake

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome!!

Artists like you are one of the reasons I train harder everyday...Even though I may never be as good as you, among others, it never hurts to try.

Anyways, 10/10, 5/5, favorited and downloaded. Not much more I can do, since your already on my favorite artists list. >_>

Maybe I should make Fulp put this song all over the ng? =D


Mrmilkcarton responds:

Why get fulp to listen to a song that isn't complete.


asjesseasjesse

Rated 5 / 5 stars

dude

you are good at what you do make song loger make it bit faster and add 1 to 2 more layers and you will be a goddly song


Mrmilkcarton responds:

Do an Author search for Bjra and you will the melody redone in our little "Vs" song.


dark-side13dark-side13

Rated 5 / 5 stars

awsome

this is just awesome the only problem is that this song should be 10 minutes long not only one .


Mrmilkcarton responds:

Demo of a song I won't finish :P.


The-Great-OneThe-Great-One

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Hmm...

Yes you do need more build-up. Do not do random sounds unless you're absolutely sure you can pull them together. Maybe make it a little more smooth at the 1:04 mark, this may seem odd at first but trust me you'll have more to build on.


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Mrmilkcarton responds:

I've been doing alot of revamping to the build ups. the second build up has changed a fair amount to the one thats up here now. Thanks for the review.