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Date
03/30/2008
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Song
3.6 MB
3 min 55 sec
Score
4.16 / 5.00

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Author Comments

EDIT: the finished song has been posted! go check it out and enjoy it!

I THINK I MAY ACTUALLY FINISH A SONG!!!

Lol, this is the near complete version of my latest solo song. The other version I left at a painful cliffhanger, so I figured I should get back to work on it as soon as possible.

Anyways... I've got the song to the point where I feel the listener can imagine their own little story to go along with the song. I'm interested in hearing what kind of mental images people get when they hear this song... so do share! The way I have it set up is that there is an actual sense of time in the song. It starts out in the present (in whatever time frame u wish it to be), then it drifts to the past for awhile, almost like someone is reflecting on a painful memory, and then it goes back to the present again at the end of the song. Lemme know if you see it the same way!

Finally, there may be one more update before I can finally decide this song is finished. I might mess with the levels of the song a little bit more and I'm trying to convince Josh to try out a few ideas for percussion. Wish me luck, lol. He might be too busy practicing smash brothers to take the time the time to do percussion. Poor guy... he just doesn't realize that he'll never be able to beat me...

Enjoy the song!

Reviews


GloudasGloudas

Rated 5 / 5 stars

well done

This is really well done and powerful. I definately felt the past and present thing, and just the fact that you were able to make changes like that in the sound is incredible. Great job, 5 and 10


KTRECORDS responds:

Thank you : ) ! It wasn't easy, lol. I spent quite a few hours cussing trying to get this song to the point it's at now. Hopefully with a few more adjustments, I can make it even more powerful. Anyways, glad u like it! Take a look at kelwynshade's music for more quality music like this. He has been the one teaching me how to really make music, so most of the credit goes to him and his style.

-Jason
KTRECORDS


KEROBERUSKEROBERUS

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Amazing. Breathtaken...Just lost for words...

Amazing. Listening to this really does live up to its' name. I really do see the problems in the past of what i've done, and does bring tears to my face.

I love it.


KTRECORDS responds:

It's always great to hear that the listeners understand your music. Thanks for the review! Keep checkin back for the finalized product!

-Jason
KTRECORDS


littlebigpielittlebigpie

Rated 5 / 5 stars

awesome

when i heard it i imagined a beautiful gift slowly unfolding and it turned into i spiral of colors opened and morphed shape into i picture of me dumping my girl for another then gettin dumped by that one and getting rejected by my first girl.
makes me think about sad events every time i hear it. i love it dude. i listened to it because u said something about it in an author response so i found it and i love KTRrecords even more know. this is the longest review ive ever wrote for something. this song brought me peace. if this was played in church i might actually go. well keep up the good work dude its going on the third time i listened to it.


KTRECORDS responds:

Very nice! I can see your story fitting the song as well! Thanks for sharing it and thanks for checking out our other works as well! If you want more quality music, check out my partner's work under the name kelwynshade. He's got stuff that blows my music away, lol.

-Jason
KTRECORDS


kelwynshadekelwynshade

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Your song sucks

and you suck....

...just messin'. Great song man. I know, I've been so drugged up from the wisdom teeth pulling that its been tough to stay focused. I'll try the percussion stuff later on today and see what I can come up with for ya.

Great job man. Oh, and pertaining to Smash Bros, the only thing I'll never be able to beat you at is the number of losses. buahahahaha.


KTRECORDS responds:

lol, no prob man. No hurry. I can't rush someone who is doing me a favor. Do it whenever u get a chance.

I'll go ahead and let you talk your sh!t too since it's painfully obvious that your still high from your hydrocodone if you seriously think you can beat me at smash brothers, lol!


OddlerOddler

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Dude, awesome song. I love it.

"It starts out in the present (in whatever time frame u wish it to be), then it drifts to the past for awhile, almost like someone is reflecting on a painful memory, and then it goes back to the present again at the end of the song. Lemme know if you see it the same way!"

ROFLMAO now I can't see it any other way!!!!!!!

It does sound like that though when you put it the way you did...although I don't know if that would have came to mind otherwise. Sounds great none-the-less!

Perfect 10 in my books. You put in some nice time and effort into this one I can tell!


KTRECORDS responds:

Great! I'm glad you like it!
I'll admit, when I first started the song, I didn't really know how a story would flow with it. I sent an early version of it to Josh and he said it reminded him of a King that had just lost a war and he was standing out in a thunderstorm looking at his destroyed city with his head down in regret wishing things would have gone another way.
Josh's idea is what gave me the inspiration to finish the song the way I did. If it was Josh's story, it would start with the king looking at his destroyed city with the dead or dying inhabitants all around...then it would shift to the past and then the past plays through all the way back up to the present again. The present would have started again at around 2:37 in the song. Give it another listen and see if it all makes even more sense now : ) .
Thanks again for your great fun review!

-Jason
KTRECORDS