Not what I was expecting
You've pretty much taken the Crank Dat drum sound and added it to a deep bass line with claps and some odd synth sound. When I heard it, it didn't make me think of Metal at all, it reminded me more of Soulja Boy.
Try being more original next time, and get a grungier guitar sound, maybe drop out the island-sounding crank dat drums and laying in a clap-snap combo.