Score: 10
"Nice."
date: April 3, 2008
5, 10. But I've still got some complaints. Note that I'm not saying there's anything wrong with the song, only areas where the song can be improved.
First and foremost: Parallel octaves- At points, you had all of the voices doing the exact same thing in octaves. This is a highly avoided practice in classical, because it tends to be boring for the ears. It's sometimes accepted in the piano, if it's just 1 octave, but normally just avoid it.
Second, lol, pirates of the caribbean chord progression. Not a bad thing, but to others it may be looked down on.
Just a suggestion, but at 1:09, you could fill out the trumpets more, i like it, but i thing you could have it be A-Bb (both whole notes) and then a dotted half on F, and then G-A (eight notes) Half note G, then quarter note F, E leading down to D
But yeah, no other suggestions. Great job.