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Uploaded
Mar 23, 2008 | 7:42 PM EDT
File Info
Song
3.5 MB
3 min 51 sec
Score
3.27 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.27 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
910 Plays | 105 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Trance
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Author Comments

This is a song for a short film. This is my first trance song.

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Reviews


ShanusShanus

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Strange

This song seemed to be jam packed full of lots of different tunes, beats and harmonies. I'm not a fan of how ya did the changes though, they seemed sloppy but I suppose it's your first time so it's forgiveable. I would like to commend you on the piano bit at the end though, was very well done. Alright song needing some conformity

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Little-RenaLittle-Rena

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Alright

Well there are parts to this which do sound very good but the change in tune in parts of this really seem to let it down a little, I don't think the transition of them really seems to work with this, a better way to fit them in might sound a little better and work better. Maybe not have such huge changes in songs through the whole thing, more a gradual change might sound better.

There are parts in this which do sound to be very well played which is good to hear but then there are parts that just seem to conflic with parts to. The first part sounds pretty good and everything, then the suddend change to a sound compleatly diffrent spoils it in my opinion.

3/5

<3

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jxl180 responds:

Thanks for the review. I was kind of trying to get like a prgression you know. Where it starts slow and kind of soft. Progressively getting faster, hard, louder, etc. I think I probably came on to it too fast.

The reason why I sometimes use the same response as another review is because the reviewer pretty much had the same suggestions and stuff as a previous one, and I really like to respond to all review.


CoopCoop

Rated 4 / 5 stars

2 songs in 1

This tune is really 2 songs - the protracted introduction and the second dance tune. The first part sounds like a piece that I'd use in some sort of adventure game, while the other one wouldn't be out of place in a WipeOut or Need For Speed style racing game.

I'd suggest that you maybe split the two and add them as separate entries - this will give you much more freedom when it comes to the breakdown of the track. I'm not entirely sure that it works effectively flicking a switch between the two poles of this tune. It's as if someone is flicking between two radio stations for some reason.

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jxl180 responds:

Thanks for the review. I was kind of trying to get like a prgression you know. Where it starts slow and kind of soft. Progressively getting faster, hard, louder, etc. I think I probably came on to it too fast.


HaggardHaggard

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

\m/

The intro is very nice, but the change over from the intro to the "real" song isn't really fitting there. A smoother change over would be better here, I think.

The main part of the song sounds very nice. You had a lot of changes from the beat, which is a good thing. That way you keep the listener interested and the song doesn't get repititive too fast.
But the same problem I had with the intro applies here as well. The change overs from the "soft" parts to the "hard" parts doesn't really fit. You should try to work on a smoother change over and you have a great song here!

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jxl180 responds:

Thank you, i was thinking when making it if I should just take out that intro and start off the song after it and leave the intro part towards the end.


ViridisViridis

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not Bad

Hmmm, not a bad audio, nice soft intro and i like the way the drums build up, but, the beat they go into doesnt really fit too well with the intro i dont think, the transfers need to be smoother as they just stop and change. The song needs some variation throughout it but apart from that its ok.
I like the piano outro!

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jxl180 responds:

Thank you, i was thinking when making it if I should just take out that intro and start off the song after it and leave the intro part towards the end.