Edited some stuff from the Demo. I tuned down the Volume ALOT, (it was very loud at first.) I also fixed the Sidechaining. put some extra instruments in and most importantly... FINISHED IT! so tell me how u like it, and what i should improve on. Reviews are the Only thing that keeps me up to date on my songs.
Keeping the flow,
Dj-Typhlanar.
Like I said
Refurbish this song. It has a lot of potential to be a badass song, but it sounds too relaxing and doesn't have the right set of sounds or structure to sound that way.
The melody is what I am talking about. Make something different out of it. its epic.
Good Idea, getting on it right away.
The Crashes :(
The song is good but the crashes are killing it. Either change it or remove them completely.
- XeroQ
:P Ill remake this for you guys ;D
Pretty cool
i dont know where the low score comes from, this is pretty cool, i love the tune! it is really great. cool drums, but the crash is maybe a bit loud and to ''KNUSH'' sounding, a little tip is to make the crash blend in, and add some delay and stuff:) but this is a really great song, and i really enjoyed it:)
keep it up^^
-Beating-Source-
The low scores are probably from the FL Drums, Bad Sidechaining, and so on. I still think i should remake and finish for sure!
ok, I'll review your stuff...
I saw that you like reviews, so...here it goes:
1. The distortion isn't my style, but if you wanted it, then that's your song, but I don't personally like the distrotion thing. So, you might wanna get cleaner songs.
2. Please, please, please...get rid of that crash cymbal. get a better one. I don't care, that's one of those crash cymbals htat when I browse my stuff, i'd say, ew. That's the first thing that you can easily fix with this to make it sound better.
3. Add more FX. this is something that took me a while, and is a little difficult to find that right effect with your song, ya know? but just add two or three FX throughout the song, ya know, here and there, make it lively.
4. Great melody! I like it, but the stutters could have been left out I think...
5. When I first heard this, i was thinking Nintendo. If you want more professional sounding stuff, get some VST plugins. I recommend
Vanguard (great for techno/industrial)
Z3ta+
Nexus
V-Station (great for trance)
Also, go to VIP zone samples to get some more drum samples and stuff. maybe a drum loop...just google it, great free samples site, that's where i get my stuff.
You can really improve this, I know you could...
PM me if you want me to see what i can to for this song, unless you like to just do things yourself.
I would say that you should listen to my stuff, but most of my new stuff is not on here, since i've got those labels now, so i'm not gonna give my full songs away for free. Although, my "Demo" is my newest track. It's a new sub-genre for me, industrial, but i hope i got a good grasp of it. now to move onto trance...he he he.
7/10
5/5 (i'm not a zero voting dick)
DJ Derrick
Woah, long review O.o . Okay, her goes my big reply:
The "Distortion" thing is usually used for techno and dance, like what i have here. Alot of people use it.
I will get rid of the Crash Cymbol, I have been looking around peoples songs and realized its used alot.
Now for the FX. Let me count here... 23 FZ in the Mixer, if thats what ur talking about.
Those "shutters" are actually a little thing called sidechaining, a really good method that some experts use (Envy for example). Thanks for saying its a great melody though.
You related this to Nintendo?! Well, I have 2 out of those 4 (my nexus doesnt work). I have Vanguard in this song actually (the Arpeggiator) but i didn't use Z3ta+ in it.
I'm gonna check out that sitre you mentioned, just to see if thers any good vocals and/or drums.
I will check out ur stuff for sure, just because i like to see other peoples creations. Thanks for voting 5/5, unlike that Spamwangler (LOL) guy. I really apreciate it and i will do the same thing to ur songs.
Keep it flowing,
Dj-Typhlanar
I Actually Like this...
This isn't really the style the audio i usually like, but this is quite cool. I rated this as a 4. You could add some more instruments to add to it. But yeah, overall it is pretty good.
Thank you!!!! At least it isn't a zero :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Prodigal 
