Score: 8
"Noice!"
date: March 21, 2008
The arp you bring at the beginning though, it sounds dry and off-key, and when you bring in the bass, percussion, etc., it's amazingly loud, even over the melody of the song. I suppose you should add more effects to make it sound further away (reverb, phasering, etc.)
Also, your bass seems to be clipping the song? I can't tell if it's clipping or it's just distortion, but I know it sounds a bit unclean).
I really like the melody and the arrangement of this song, though! If you mesh in that arp a little more to make it sound more ambient (which I'm sure you're going for by the name of the song), and make sure it stays on-key, it'd make this track tons more easy on the ears. ;)
Also, this isn't trance, this is downtempo.
Keep it up man! :)
March 21, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks!