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Uploaded
Mar 21, 2008 | 7:01 PM EDT
File Info
Song
7 MB
7 min 37 sec
Score
2.60 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 2.60 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
551 Plays | 75 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Trance
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Author Comments

This is my latest trance effort, I spent quite a bit of time with this one, getting help from a lot of people and good advice. Enjoy!

Reviews


DeshielDeshiel

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Jake is right

You can do it! YOu can do iiiiiiit !!!



JakeHoshgothenJakeHoshgothen

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

As a General Rule...

People never get tens from me. This is no exception. There is always room for improvement. That being said, I have very little to complain about here, so lets get started.

This song starts off a little slow, and thats not so good for it. I think a lot of people will get to the song page, and find it to be too slow, and just move on, and , miss what I consider some of the best of what newgrounds has to offer. So just sit tight people. It's good.

Now, I think I was half expecting to hear it 'blow up' in the middle somewhere, but I didn't which was both rather disappointing and a little bit of 'Oh really? You can do that? Interesting...' Which is becoming less and less common nowadays. Such a pity. Second, I thought the name was far too cliche. Choose something original to go along with that ingenuety of yours. You had the brains and creativity to come up with a fantastic song, so put some effort into finding an equally creative name for it.

I think you could have played around with the backbeat a little bit more than you did, and have a dual evolution, rather than just progressing at the melodic level.

Aside from those three things, I think you're going to be top thirty next week, and I look forward to seeing you there. Keep up the excellent work. Newgrounds needs more 8 minute songs. Particularly exeplary pieces like this. 9.5 out of 10.


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anony-mouseanony-mouse

Rated 5 / 5 stars

word

s'all good.