heavy

the instraments you used are really heavy for a song like this. try to lighten it up.

Alright

It was okay, but I just didn't feel it

Nice

i like the "peacful" Feeling of the origanal version though. i like the beat but it could do without all of the other changes. mabey even just tone them down a little

man

Good work i like it.

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now i know the aplhabet which was first invented by the Phoenicians (not an English alphabet though)