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Took this down, but now I'm reuploading. :-)

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by: TheBreeD

date: March 17, 2008

I think there's a couple of things here i can suggest. I would put a delay on that crash(at least for the first time its used). Also with a non typical(which is what i hear you were going for) beat of that style, you need a nice strong bassline behind the rest to give the song a 'full' feeling, or possible just a deep sine wave to shake them a little. The snare i think coulda used a little more punch, and the sidechaining should be turned up just a tad bit. Anyways those are my suggestions.

Cheers,

BreeD

March 17, 2008

Author's Response:

I don't wanna break the track with too much bass, but maybe I should put more sub around that area. The snare could use some more punch too I s'pose. Sidechaining seems fine to me.

Thanks for the review! :)