Score: 3
"slipping off beats & no changes."
date: May 4, 2008
The notes are brilliantly played and I'm guessing it's 2 tracks?
It seems like it's constantly slipping off the beat though - you might want to make a practice of tapping your foot whilst playing - I know it certainly helps me stay in beat!
It is of course short and unoriginal. I guess you purposely didn't want to change much and were just doing a 'demo' to make it easier on yourself?
Still, it'd have been nice if you'd have added some 'twist' to this - when I hear a cover, it's always preferable to hear a new interpretation, rather than just a new performance of the same notation. With a cover like this, you'r just asking to be compared to the original and that's almost always going to be unfavourable.
Also, I don't really understand why you didn't finish it. Seems abrupt & makes it worse.
Keep at it though - you've got skills!