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I absolutely love this short loop, but have no idea how to continue it. I wrote it a year ago and haven't touched it ever since.

I'd appreciate any suggestions on how I might lengthen it. :)

Edit: This reached #24 on the Best Tracks ever list this week! Thank you all so much for the reviews and support. Keep it coming! Also, I respond to EVERY review, so don't be afraid to ask any questions. :D

Edit 2: (5-28-08) Two weeks ago, I was ecstatic to find that this track reached #24 on the audio portal front page. Reviews began pouring in, and I was overjoyed. Last week, it disappeared from the front page to my disappointment. When I logged on to NG today, though, I was pleasantly surprised to find that this track is now #13 on the front page of the Audio Portal! Thanks to everyone for their support and reviews. :D



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very nice.

I don't know how you could expand the song, but for what it is, it is great. Very calm and relaxing. If you ever get around to making it longer, it would definatly become one of my personal game music files.

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BlazingDragon responds:

Calm and relaxing is what I do best. :P Hopefully, I'll be able to continue it and make it sound good.

Thanks for the review! :D


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hey!! :)

I'm making a mystery game, and I was wondering if I could maybe use this song in it. It's really good.

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BlazingDragon responds:

That would be awesome. I can't tell you how much I've wanted this to be in a flash. :)

Thanks for the review, and you are more than welcome to use my music!


Rated 5 / 5 stars


A very nice song, gives one a lot of inspiration.
I read that you have problem continuing the song, know the feeling :(
Personally I think that you should build up the song more with the strings and the bass but not let them take over the piano, a harp sounds nice :)

I don't really like the idée of a flute or oboe, but it's just because it does not fit in with how I feel the song.
But that's just me, write it the way that feels right for you and it will be awesome!
Thanks for sharing this beautiful song!

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BlazingDragon responds:

Strings are definitely a good thing. :P I do not think that an oboe or flute would fit, either. I guess that my main question is where to go in terms of chords and melody?...

Thanks for the awesome review! I appreciate it very much, as this song is my favorite out of those I've written. :)


Rated 5 / 5 stars


This reminds me of the music boxes I used to listen to all the time when I was a kid. I love the innocence this song just seems to have, at least when I listen to it. Those peaceful years of youth when everything is just happy.
I agree with JoshE121390, if you did want to add more you could add some guitar. Keep this as an intro and then drop down an octave or two and add a counter melody. If you don't want to add guitar add a harp and maybe flute and make it sound kind of like a peaceful day inside watching the rain.
Amazing job!

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BlazingDragon responds:

That is actually really helpful! I think that a harp accompaniment and flute melody would fit nicely. Maybe an oboe, too. Unfortunately, I have no skill writing for guitar, but I could look into it.

I find it very interesting how the song brings back memories of when everything was happy and innocent. It is a minor song and I have thought it to be very sad, and yet it brings back such memories. I love how music can be interpreted so differently depending on the listener! :)

Thanks for the review!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

No freaking way this could ever be redone!!!

IN one's opinion you dont have to change a thing!. Now understand that I am new to this game and I have been browsing the site and in all my time in this place have I ever dedicated nearly as much time doing anything else as I have listening to this glorious piece of perfection! This is one of the few pieces that has really touched me deeply. (Im dang near in tears!!!) Great Job! Much respect! =)

BlazingDragon responds:

You're review deeply touches me. I'll get one every few weeks (or longer) and they help encourage me. Comments such as your's are the ones that inspire me to keep on writing, though. Thank you for the kind words. :)