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my second submission, for pico & friends. enjoy!!

its kind of rough--i finished most of hte song in the course of an hour since i decided to play it at school but never finished it. nevertheless, i think its tight :D gimme feedback.

review me, and ill review you. got it??

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Average Score: 8.8 / 10

Score: 7

"phew"

by: endlessnumber

date: June 11, 2008

Hm, the bass definitely doesn't fit the mood. The strings would have fit if you had written for broader chords (maybe some higher up notes thrown in there) - cause then it's like Bob Sinclar or something, string samples.

I loved the rhythm - except for the claps, which felt awkward. Possibly a lowpass.

4/5

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Score: 8

"Nice rythms"

by: Jurian

date: March 23, 2008

really enjoyed every minute of this song, but it was too latin sometimes. The chimes were nice, and all the FX came together nicely. The beat was great, the looping wasnt. Sometimes it got repititive, not like you wereusing the same thing but in the same style a lot. Try adding like a real chorus or something. Great job.

Jurian

March 30, 2008

Author's Response:

hehe ill consider it, tho not the looping part--if someone wants a loopable version they can pm me or something, tho i think ill keep my songs as... you know... songs lol. thx for ur thoughts :)

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Score: 8

"Hmmm."

by: GronmonSE

date: March 23, 2008

Not a fan of the beat, but that's just because I don't like the styles. They are well-crafted though.

It sounds like you used the FL Peak Controller in your song, but I'm not sure if you used FL to begin with. It sounds awfully similar to one of the tutorial songs, coincidence?

It's still a nice melody that blends with the drums though, nice use of sound FX too.

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April 1, 2008

Author's Response:

haha nope i use reason, i tried fl with my friend before tho [the result is in another submission] but i jst dont know it well enuf to do much with it haha. tho the effect is the same--its called sidechaining, involves compressors if ur interested.

yeah it doesnt seem that house is very popular around these parts, but ill still crank out some eveery now and then. thx for the rev :)

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Score: 8

"Pretty Sweet."

by: Shadow-1409

date: March 23, 2008

This is a pretty cool audio, it has a nice beat to it and i like the variety within in the track. The chimes every now and again are a nice touch and i like the variation at 2.10, it provides something completely different to the rest of the track. Keep up the good work.

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March 30, 2008

Author's Response:

yayy me! [btw danngngg i was gone for a week and the review request club gave me liek 11 reviews... i like this!]

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Score: 8

"Nice"

by: Shanus

date: March 22, 2008

I really liked it, great solid beat with lots of variance within the use of instruments.
Quite liked the random chimes every bar or so. Loved the bass part at about 1:46. Quite good.and the break down part whenever it was nearing the end. Very innovative. I also quite enjoyed how you ended with everything fading out but with a lingering sound, great job

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March 30, 2008

Author's Response:

im glad u liked it :)

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