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"my mistakes" track 1.

made this track to remind myself to never get shitty grades ever again...

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Average Score: 8.3 / 10

Score: 8

"Tight"

by: Repost

date: March 13, 2008

This is a tight beat, I'll give you that. But however, I think that the hi hats in the beginning, around 0:15 to 0:43 is too quick. Maybe remove half of those and it'll sound a bit better <_<. Great job though, keep it up.

March 13, 2008

Author's Response:

haha ya i got real lazy on the hihats... sry lol.

if i do a remake ill definitely make a more diverse hihat pattern with better quality.

K-Dm

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Score: 8

"lol, get better grades :D"

by: alternativesolution

date: March 13, 2008

but then you might not have made this..
then again, getting good grades is supposed to be a million times better than just making a song..even if its awesome..
-.-
anyway, this was overall pretty great, i loved the tune. the beat suited the song, sometimes i thought the kick was just a little loud at some quiet parts so it sounded a bit sharp. oh. nevermind. the beat was too loud over the rest of the song. there. that makes better sense :/
it would sound a lot better if u added in a bass there, because some parts seeemed a little too empty.
but i really love the melody, it reminds me a little of linkin park. . .
the progression with the strings is lovely, it adds a nice feel.
of failure.
T.T
haha even tho this was influenced because of that, it's okay cuz the song is good :D
i feel like rappin too this xD
maybe i will..
o.o
i may never have time..
i may never remember..
i may never know..
ok that was stupid. sorry.
oh yeah one more thing: the strings were a little off at some parts in which it seemed like they came in a little late. that's it.
-vesta

March 13, 2008

Author's Response:

lol ya i intend to get better grades ^___^

ive been waaaaay too slack this year and im alrdy kicking myself cuz its gonna be a bitch raisin my GPA bak up.

neways on to ur review...

1) beat is too loud.
i agree... lol. i also think my hihats sound like crap.

2) some parts are too empty, add a bass.
i also think one or two more bg instruments would make it sound more complete... and a bass is a good idea.

3) late strings.
im pretty sure ive placed the strings just right... but the full strings in the edirol orchestral always kinda just fade themselves in making them seem a lil late... so i have no idea how to fix that lol.

at any rate... awesome review. uve found everything i thought was wrong wit the track and more.

K-Dm

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Score: 9

"epic"

by: djconnect

date: March 13, 2008

im in love with the piano roll. great peace of work i dont think you should change a thing. maybe add a singer for a chorus and then some one rap over the rest.

March 13, 2008

Author's Response:

thx for the kind review... but i can actually see quite a few areas for improvement lol.

maybe when i get a faster computer (or more memory) and im done raising my GPA then ill make a better version.

K-Dm

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