Be a Supporter!

Credits & Info

Date
03/12/2008
File Info
Song
2.2 MB
2 min 28 sec
Score
4.37 / 5.00

Related Content

Heard in 1 Entry!


  • Pongnop
    Pongnop by kchamp
    • Game
    • Rated E
    • 36,638 Views

View all submissions featuring this audio file.

Licensing Terms

Attribution:
You must give credit to the artist.
Noncommercial:
You may not use this work for commercial purposes unless you make specific arrangements with the artist.
Share Alike:
If you alter, transform, or build upon this image, you may distribute the resulting creation only under a license identical to this one.
Score:
Rated 4.37 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
7,869 Plays | 808 Downloads
Share Links:
Genres:
Electronic - Trance
Tags:
None

Author Comments

Im back to sumbitting frequently! I have alot of new stuff to bring too...my last sumbission was in 07 and Ive made plenty of songs, just really never felt they were complete, and there much much better...but finally I finished this one and Ive had a break through so expect alot more...

also expect a collab between me and my friend (dj-unknown) - check him out

Reviews


chimairekchimairek

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 23, 2008

Melody = cool, Mixing = so,so

Cool cheerful melody ^_^
Nice use of vox (from VEC2 soundpack,amirite? :P)
Its awesome,but it should be mixed in a different way.
MOAR POWER TO TEH DRUMS AND BASS !
You go to my favorite artists list anyway.
PS. Try to mix it again and maybe master it. You'll get 10/10 from me ^_^


DJ-VIZ responds:

Thanks, and yes vox are from the VEC2 soundpack :]

I agree that the format of the song could be better, but as Ive said before I was getting bored with the song and honestly didnt want to put in anymore time into it.... I have this new song im making that I had to work on ! so i just sumbitted this to get it out the way lol...anyway thanks again for the review, and id like to know when your song for that demo comes out!


Music-storyMusic-story

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 16, 2008

Hey long time no see

Cool, a collab. Let's see how it went.

Good:
1) Happy intro. I always like happy stuff.
2) Happy hardcore with lots of white noise. 41 seconds in I like that percussion.
3) 54 seconds hah. Is that someone vox? Anyway the bass is very nice. Few fx here and there work well too.
4) Fitting. Energy vox for a song named energy. Where did you get that vox?

Hmm:
1) !! at 13 seconds I think the transition was too quick. Quiet to super loud. Maybe a smoother transition in your future stuff.
2) 1:34 I was expecting a bigger climax, but the same stuff. I suppose the song is pretty short so you didn't need much diversity.
3) Hah. Okay the cheering loop is good for lots of songs. But a cheering crowd to applaud the end of the song is a bit strange

This was surprisingly easy to review. Lots of energy made it fun to review. The problem is that you boosted quickly into the climax which forced you to drag on the song at the same energy level rather than build up. I was hoping for more with that strange vox part. Only bass/percussion/and vox? Add another instrument on top to build up to something. Anyway, this is a huge improvement from your older stuff. Well done (goes to dj-unknown too) and I finally posted that trance song of mine. You get 9/10 rev and 5/5 vote


People find this review helpful!
DJ-VIZ responds:

Yeah everything you said was 100 percent on...

I was getting so tired of working on it that I just sumbitted! considering I havent sumbitted in months...unfortunatly my big climax was so early, and it was really hard to introduce something even bigger... I enjoy the break with the deep club bass and the sliced vox, maybe shouldve added it in again somewhere....

Well done (goes to dj-unknown too) and I finally posted that trance song of mine. You get 9/10 rev and 5/5 vote

-- I made this by myself, well I guess dj unknown gave me some advice on it, but this wasnt our collab maybe you skimmed through my commentary, but anyway were working on a collab, I hope turns out well.... Thanks for taking the time to review and Ill check out your song deffinitly


YodamanjaroYodamanjaro

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 13, 2008

remember me?

hmm...maybe you don't remember...you gave me a review for that old song of mine, Club Scene.

Now, I got signed to a minor record label as a collab, and am working with a vocalist, and have a song currently in the top scoring list here on NG. What am I getting at? I'm climbing that ladder, and you were one of the people who heard my starting stuff, which I have to say was junk. MC BigBoy is no more, btw. lol. gay name.

anyways, this is a good song. what can make it better? more FX, I guess. I dunno. it's pretty good as a song right now, but if you want some more advice, I'd say

1. More FX
2. Longer breakdowns
3. work with the channel automations more, i guess....
4. have a more complex bass. i'm a culprit of it as well. off-beat basslines...a DJ's best friend, but can get too repetitive at times.
5. maybe an arp? i love my arps, that's why i put it there.

remember, these are suggestions, just to have you experiment more with the song.

I gave my 5 and 10 for you. I'm liking it.

DJ Derrick

btw check my new stuff out sometime. I think you'll notice the improvement :)


People find this review helpful!
DJ-VIZ responds:

Yeah I absolutly remember you lol... dandylions and what not... congrats on the minor record label....... as for your suggestions I somewhat agree with. More fx I agree, I mean I used a few, but I knew this song wasnt "meaty" enough, but honestly I got really tired with it...and once I had a full song down it was hard to go back in and add more fx because it just doesnt seem to fit once u think the songs complete...the bass - yeah couldve been more complex but it was a soundfront bass and offbeat is what they suit best... arps eh cudve been used, really wasnt needed

again thanks for the review, and yeah ill check your stuff out


general405general405

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 12, 2008

Nice!

Good melody and pads, and i like the voice also! :)
I've seen a bunch of people who use FL Studio here on NG, but only one guy that uses Reason 4, which is what i use. Do you know any artists here who use Reason?
My only critique of this song is the kick. Maybe you could pump it back up and upload the song again?

~general405


DJ-VIZ responds:

first off thanks, and yeah maybe ill fix up the song and sumbit a remix of some sort using some suggestions....and yes the majority of people use fl but there are alot of reason users on here too... the most known I know of is paragonx9, her stuff is amazing. I suggest if you aren''t liking reason try FL its a good user-friendly program, and has everything you need if you learn how to use it...


TMM43TMM43

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 12, 2008

voted 5

My god, this song is intense.
The melody is fantastic, and the pads really compliment them well.
The bass was great as well, but the kick was REALLY weak!
When I heard the melody my blood started pumping, and I was waiting for that hard kick to come in, but nothing. :(
It was a little bit of a let down...
Other than that, you've got talent! Really amazing work man. Keep more songs like this coming.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my latest song "Groovejet"


People find this review helpful!
DJ-VIZ responds:

thanks -- yeah the kick is a bit soft :/ which is strange because it wasnt when I had finished it, but I did edit it in another software program to delete some extra silence at the end of the song then dragged the mp3 into fl again and something couldve gotten messed up , but thanks for the review alot.... and Ill check out your song if not now tomorrow definitly its getting a bit late ! Im sure its worthy of a 5, ive listened to your stuff before!