Well Hell, that was messed up.
But... Good? I'm not really sure to be honest. I think I don't like it, then I do. Then I don't again, then I shit myself from confusion. I guess if you got more comfortable with this type of style, which to me is orchestral techno, your future songs will be amazing. The one thing I REALY disliked was the snare sound you used, like, twice. I can't STAND the noise of a concert snare. I find them to be about as usefull as an asshole in your mouth. But that's just an opinion, really. Sooooo, I guess I'll quit rambling now and make some sort of emoticon at the end.
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