Score: 10
"Percussion! =D"
date: June 21, 2008
This is much better than the original, although it isn't trance it's still good.
Great that you put percussion into this song, sounds way better. The saw you used for the main tune sounds good, sounds like something out of nexus. Although the internal effect the saw has made it sound bad, for example at 0:52 where the saw-main tune was introduced. There are more saws in nexus that sound similar to the one you used, maybe you should experiment with them. ;)
I'll give this 10/10 4/5
Maybe check out my songs, might be your style.
(Trance/Techno)